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ਰੂਪ  ਢਿੱਲੋਂ
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ਮੈਂ ਹੀ ਦਿੱਤਾ ਜਨਮ ਤੈਨੂ , ਮੈਂ ਹੀ ਦਿੱਤਾ ਸਾਹ

ਮੈਂ ਹੀ ਦਿੱਤਾ ਜਨਮ ਤੈਨੂ , ਮੈਂ ਹੀ ਦਿੱਤਾ ਸਾਹ
ਸਮਝ ਨਾ ਰਖੇਲ ਰੰਡੀ, ਸਮਝ ਮੈਨੂ ਮਾਂ

ਠੀਕ ਤੁਸੀਂ ਹੋ ਭੈਣ ਧੀ ਤੇ ਮੇਰੀ ਮਾਂ
ਹੁਣ ਅਜ਼ਾਦੀ ਦੇ ਦਿੱਤੀ, ਮਿਲਗਿਆ ਤੈਨੂ ਥਾਂ

ਖੁੱਲੀ ਛੁੱਟੀ ਹੁਣ ਕਰ ਲੈ ਅਪਣੇ ਚਾਹ
ਲਾਜ ਨਾ ਭੁੱਲੀਂ, ਗੁਆਈਂ ਨਾ ਅਪਣਾ ਰਾਹ
 

26 Jan 2011

Balihar Sandhu BS
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Bahut Vadhia 22 G....thnx 4 sharing

26 Jan 2011

Jass Panaichan
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nice likhia aa veer .......keep writing 

27 Jan 2011

Lovepreet Dhaliwal Sidhu
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too nice..

27 Jan 2011

kulbir dakoha
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wah paji wah ......bohut sohna ji...

27 Jan 2011

ਰੂਪ  ਢਿੱਲੋਂ
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shukaria sabh nu

27 Jan 2011

harjinder kaur
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superb!!!!

ਮੈਂ ਹੋਰ ਵੀ ਪੜ੍ਹਨਾ ਲੋਚਦੀ  ਹਾਂ ਰੁਪਿੰਦਰ ਜੀ...( i mean extended version)

 

thanks for sharing...

28 Jan 2011

Simreet kaur dhillon
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realy nice,,,

28 Jan 2011

Nimarbir Singh
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bahut hi sohna likheya bai ji,,keep writing n keep sharing

28 Jan 2011

Harsimran dhiman
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bahut  vadiya   lakhiya.............................

29 Jan 2011

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