Mainu samajh na aave mere maalka                        eh kaisi khed too duniaya utee rachayi jaana ae .       Roj kinne mitti de khidaune tayar karda Duje paase pher aap hi dhaayi jaana ae ..Eh dunia hai ik kafila . .mauafir aayi jande ne.. musafir jaayi jaande ne.eh jhuthi jihi hai jindagi                                 Per kinne lok supne sajayi jaande ne ..beshak kaafila turda taa ikatha hai ...per kayi musafir piche shut hi jaande nee  ...Maut da musam koyi ik kyo rakheya na rabba.. wich baharan de kyon kayi patte

tut jaande ne Chak chak k modhian te maa peo ne putt khidaya c   ....Aaj pher putt modhian te....per jind rehgi ikalli aa..Lakh Kheda duniya te lok khed de ne ..per Maut di khed awalli a ..Jinni marji pakki yaari hove ..bheed de wich aksar hath shut hi jaande ne ...Maut sa musam koyi ik kyo rakheya na rabba ..wich baharan de kyon kayi patte tut jande ne ..

ਬੋਹਤ ਹੀ ਵਾਦਿਯ ਰਚਨਾ ਹੈ,,, ਕਮਾਲ ਦਾ ਲਿਖੇਯਾ ਹੈ ਤੁਸੀਂ 

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writing bahut sohni a ...... par padhan vich thodi dikkat bhara .g....

plz ehnu sahi thng nal likho g... bahut sohni rachna a .... tfs..

Har roz de vangu asi jaag k raat langayi ea.. Ena tadpheya ohdi yad vich ik pal v need na ayi ea.. DEEP di kismat vich eh kyn likhi tanhayh ea.. Ohde hathon kyn likhi SAHLON di honi tahbayi ea....Deep Sahlon