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Jaspreet Singh
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Mazhab hoye haavi tehzeebaa.n de utte..

I had this one with me from the Orkut 'kosey chaanan' days . Unfortunately, I do not remember the Author's name. I aplogize for not being able to mention it here. Je kise nu yaad hai te please add kar deyo! 

 

Mazhab hoye haavi tehzeebaa.n de utte..
kihda zor chldai naseeban de utte!!

Mere rehnumao ehnu hunn te uttaro,
maseeha kyon tangeai saleeba.n de utte !!

Ya rabb! vik gye sbb, dhra ponn paani ,
kree.n mehar dataa .greeban de utte !!

Pandat bole agg hai , Mula bole agg hai ,,
eh agg kitho.n aayi a jeebha.n de utte !!

Dushman d ta chhado oh te gair he c..
reha hunn yakee.n na habibaa.n de utte !!

Dwa j na hove ,dua kr k dekho ..
ik baitha khuda hai tabeeba.n de utte !!

Khuda d zami.n te aadamkhor aadam,
hai khal sher d khushnaseeba.n de utte !!

Yaar de hath da khanjar jo pith vich utarea,
MAANA ki gila hunn raqebaa.n de utte....!!

26 Jun 2012

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woww.. vadiyaa..a..g..

26 Jun 2012

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1 bhut vdia rachna ...tfs jaspreet g......!

28 Jun 2012

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Jisdi v rachna hai...hai bahut vadhia....Jaspreet jee shukriya tuhada ithey share karan layi

28 Jun 2012

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nice one....... but can't remember from KC one or two????


thanx for sharing.......

 

 

30 Jun 2012

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Thanx everyone for liking. It is nice indeed.

I really really wish I had the author's name. :-(

01 Jul 2012

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The style of the poem and "Mann" in the takhallus give an impression that it is written by Gurpreet Mann.

02 Jul 2012

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:-) Is he here at Punjabizm?

03 Jul 2012

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AHESAS BHARPOOR KHIAL HAI 

25 Jan 2013

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เจฌเจนเฉเจค เจ–เจผเฉ‚เจฌ เจœเฉ€ ...

25 Jan 2013

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