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Jk  Raj
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*Mehfil*

"Hum Uth K Chale Teri Mehfil Se,
Peeche Se Toone Pukara Bhi Nahi.......

Kya Karte Khud Hi Ruk Gaye Kadam Mere,
Kyunki Bin Tere Guzara BHi Nahi......"

18 Apr 2013

sukhpal singh
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Bohat khubb,

sayaad is ton agge vi likheya ja sakda hai,

and i hope you can write that...........keep it up buddy,........

hor vi khubb likho,...........likhde raho, parhde raho,..........

injh hi sahitik sargarmian wich hissa lainde raho,...........duavaan.

18 Apr 2013

ਰਾਜਵਿੰਦਰ    ਕੌਰ
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shi aa..:)

18 Apr 2013

Gurminder singh
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khiyaal vadhiya ne ....
pr likhe kisde ne ..
kirpa karke writer name jarur likhea kro
facebook to copy lagde ne
khush rho ...
18 Apr 2013

Jk  Raj
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Thanx evryone dears!!!!!!

19 Apr 2013

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