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Navi ......
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LAAPATA......

Darja ucha sucha de k rolya paira vich,
es ammdi di jaayi de ajj chaa laapta me.....
Jehdi loka diya manzila da raah banadi c,
Os kamali ji kudi de ajj raah laapata ne....
Har kudi nu jehna te maan hunda,
Oh apne hi mere hun bharaa laapata ne.....
Jehna deni c gawaahi meri zindagi de hakk ch.....
Oh matalabkhor je ajj gawaah laapta ne....
'NAVI' da dubana ta laazmi hi hai hun ,
ehna jhakhra ch meri bedi de hun malaah laapta ne.....
By - Navi

01 Aug 2014

JAGJIT SINGH JAGGI
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Steeped in pain, sense of fractured pride and disillusionment, this is a beautiful composition.

Navi ji thnx for sharing...
God bless !

01 Aug 2014

Navi ......
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thanx a tonn....there is some addition also .....i am writing it

 

"BANDE DI ADAALAT CH TA BEINSAAFI HI VEKHI AA....

OS RABB DI ADALAT CH VEKHO KI FAISLA HUNDA.....

MERE BACHE HOYE SAAH LAAPATA NE ,

YA OHDE GUNAAH LAAPTA NE..... 

 

yes fractured pride.....steeped in pain.....and a grudge with almighty or god....

 

anyways thank u so much

 

01 Aug 2014

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