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simar d sekhon sekhon
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MOHABTAN

 

Asin tauba kri mohabtan ton.
Mohabtan da aisa hashar dekheya.

Rog mohabtan hai umar vaderi.
Naal janda vich kabr dekheya.
...

Sda ron mohabtan lag ke khunje.
Bada hunda ehna te jabr dekheya.

Ashakan di jaat par ajab hai.
Ehna vich vi bada sabr dekheya.
10 May 2011

jujhar singh
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nic 1 simar ji, be continue.......

11 May 2011

Divroop sandhu
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ਚੰਗਾ ਯਤਨ ਹੈ ਸਿਮਰ ..ਪਰ ਜੇ ਪੰਜਾਬੀ ਚ ਲਿਖ ਸਕੋ ਤਾਂ ਬਿਹਤਰ ਹੋਵੇਗਾ :)

15 May 2011

Lovepreet Dhaliwal Sidhu
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gud one...

15 May 2011

simar d sekhon sekhon
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thanks jajar g.....

@divroop mainu punjabi ch likhna nahi aunda..tuc hamesha koi kami hi labya karo....lolz

@mavi thanks a lot g...

@lovepreet thnaks for likin....

15 May 2011

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