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Deepak Arora
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ਮੁਹੱਬਤ ਦੇ ਨਾਂ

ਕਦੇ ਲੜਦੇ ਸੀ ਕੰਡੇ, ਸੀਨੇ ਪੈੰਦੀ ਸੀ ਰੜਕ, 

ਅੱਜ ਇਸ ਪੱਥਰ ਦਿਲ ਨੂੰ ਨਾ ਕੋਈ ਪੈੰਦਾ ਫਰਕ,

ਚੱਲ ਹੋਰ ਨਈ ਤਾਂ ਆਸ਼ਕਾਂ ਚ ਬਹਿਣ ਜੋਗੇ ਹੋ ਗਏ,

ਕਦੇ ਸਾਡਾ ਵੀ ਕੋਈ ਹੁੰਦਾ ਸੀ, ਅਸੀ ਕਹਿਣ ਜੋਗੇ ਹੋ ਗਏ |

 

                                                 - ਕਰਮਵੀਰ ਕੌਰ

 

ਬਹਿਣ ਜੋਗੇ ਵੀ ਹੋ ਗਏ ਤੇ ਕਹਿਣ ਜੋਗੇ ਵੀ ਹੋ ਗਏ, 

ਇਸ਼ਕ ਦੀ ਦਿੱਤੀਆਂ ਸੱਟਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਅਸੀ ਸਹਿਣ ਜੋਗੇ ਵੀ ਹੋ ਗਏ,

ਤੂੰ ਤਾਂ ਭੋਲੇ ਪੰਛੀਆਂ ਵਾਂਗ ਮਾਰ ਗਈ ਉਡਾਰੀ, 

ਕਿੰਝ ਠੀਕ ਕਰੀਏ ਹੁਣ ਇਹ ਦਰਦਾਂ ਵਾਲੀ ਬਿਮਾਰੀ,

ਛੱਡਤੇ ਯਾਰ ਬਨਾਉਣੇ ਇੱਕਲਿਆਂ ਰਹਿਣ ਜੋਗੇ ਹੋ ਗਏ,

ਇੰਨਾ ਦਰਦਾਂ ਦਾ ਤੇਰੇ ਤੋ ਹਿਸਾਬ ਲੈਣ ਜੋਗੇ ਹੋ ਗਏ ||

 

                                               - ਦੀਪ

29 Jan 2011

Harkiran Jeet  Singh
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Nice deep ji...............

30 Jan 2011

Deepak Arora
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thanks harkiran ji....

30 Jan 2011

Pawandeep kaur Sidhu
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apne dard nu bhut sohna likhia e deepak tusi........................

30 Jan 2011

Deepak Arora
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thanks pawan ji...but mennu ni pta kihda dard hai eh...mera tan nai hai...wrote what just came to mind... :)

 

thanks again samjhan lyi....

30 Jan 2011

Jass Panaichan
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nice one 

30 Jan 2011

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so nice bro ...


30 Jan 2011

Deepak Arora
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thanks jass ji...

thanks sunil ji...

30 Jan 2011

harjinder kaur
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keep it up!!!!

jawab sohne dene aunde ne deepak.....like it!!!

 

31 Jan 2011

rajinder rose
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gud one g.

31 Jan 2011

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