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_Preet Dhillon_ .
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ਕੀ ਹੋਇਆ ਜੇ ਪੱਤਿਆਂ ਤੇ ਮੇਰਾ ਨਾਮ ਨਹੀਂ..

ਸੂਰਜ ਮੇਰਾ ਡੁਬਿਆ ਹੈ, ਤੇਰੀ ਸ਼ਾਮ ਨਹੀਂ,
ਤੇਰੇ ਸਿਰ ਸੇਹਰਾ ਹੈ, ਇਲਜ਼ਾਮ ਨਹੀਂ,
ਇੱਕ ਰੁੱਖ ਸਿੰਜਿਆ ਸੀ ਮੈਂ ਆਪਣੇ ਖੂਨ ਦੇ ਨਾਲ,
ਕੀ ਹੋਇਆ ਜੇ ਪੱਤਿਆਂ ਤੇ ਮੇਰਾ ਨਾਮ ਨਹੀਂ..

23 Aug 2010

Gurpreet Bassian Ldh
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wah ji wah

23 Aug 2010

Amrinder Singh
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surjit patar ji de behtreen lafz..... awesome

23 Aug 2010

_Preet Dhillon_ .
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thnx frndzz..

23 Aug 2010

rana gurbrinder riar
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i must say its good for a beginner.keep it up

 

26 Mar 2011

_Preet Dhillon_ .
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meharbani g.. :)

26 Jun 2011

Gurpreet  Dhillon
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nce line

31 May 2013

_Preet Dhillon_ .
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thnxxx g

31 May 2013

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