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Devender Maan
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nimana jeha yatan
Sehkdi c aje m...pr mukk gyi jo janda -janda oh gall keh gya
Saah jiveN mera sine ch band hoke reh gya..
Khind gya rang mere naini paye kajl da..
Subha hi maada mera...jeyoN meenh waale badal da..
Vida hoeo...mull gal wakdi da paa janda...
Gile-shikwe c mere..tu mere mathe laa janda..
M hass k jardi 2 bol taaN muho bolda..
Pyar m rajj k krdi chahe pairiN rol da...
Jagg diya nazraN ch maadi m...kudi hoke pyar kita.. Oh v haari m..
Mushkil hogya ae jyona..marr v nai sakdi m...na hi tabha kita na hi chhaddi vasdi taiN....
Jinni ladli rakhi..maape aje v ona laad ladaunde ae..
Unjh taaN yaad dhundli pai gyi ae... Pr hr saah naal yaad teri de haunke aunde ae..
04 May 2014

sukhpal singh
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Eh Nimana jeha yatan nahin veer,...........bohat wadhiya yatan hai,..........very well wriiten in few places,...........duawaan sabh diyan aap g de naal,...........hor vi khubb likho,.......samah mille tan ithe sabh writers diyan rachnawan jarror parhea karo,............is naal aap gi di sayaari wich hor vi nikhaar ahvega.

 

likhde raho,..........parhde raho

zindabaad

 

 

09 Jun 2014

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