"Dil wale rukh te na kise aalana banayea,
unj kayi parinde aa tahniyan te behnde rhe

pyar da samundar smoyi baithe ne andar bhawe,
dukh tanhayian de par fer vi sehnde rahe.

aduhriya sadhra de mehal kai man vich usare,
waro wari jehre sare hi dhende rahe.

jimewaria haith jajbat ki dab laye ,
loki 'Ranjit' nu sada pathardil kehnde rahe."

well done ! sohna likhea hai g.......thanx 4 sharing n keep sharing!

very nice..

good one... nice effort....

sohna likheya....

keep writing and keep sharing !!!

Nice One jee...Thnx 4 sharing...

Welcome to punjabizm.....

gud one 22 g

Tamana! ki hai eh tamana,,,!

dil di ik aas aduhri eh tamana.

rati yaad kara jis nu tak tak us chana,

puri ho jave freyaad ta us rab nu manna.

dil da dard roj kuj satra vich banna,

pohnche kade ta eh hook us de kanna.

ro ro ke hun ta kar leya akha nu aana,

sab kho ke 'ranjit' aje v sab kuj tainu manna.

Tamana! ki hai eh tamana,,,!

dil di ik aas aduhri eh tamana.

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Aap sab da boht boht sukriya.... i 'm happy to join all of you...