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inderpal kahlon
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pehla pehar din da sundar eh ujaala

pehla pehar din da sundar eh ujaala
gurbani de awaaz amrit da nawaala

saave saave rangaan utte lass maare trel
pind de gale te jion motiyaan di maala

chiriyaan di choon choon moraan di run chun
sur atte taal di mithaas da uchaala

peeri utte baith daadi madaani nu rirke
khetaan wal nu tur da khetaan da rakhwaala

mani nu yaad aaya jannat da udaala
pind di saver tak da koi karma waala

 

08 Dec 2010

ARSHDEEP Rakhra singh
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good work 22 g

08 Dec 2010

Jass Panaichan
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bahut vadhia ji ...........sarian ton sohni mere pind di sver 

08 Dec 2010

Lovepreet Dhaliwal Sidhu
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nice..

08 Dec 2010

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