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Mandeep Kaur
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Razaa

Razaa

 

Tu ik din aaya si….

Roopehli suver ch….armaana da suraj bann k…..

Teri nazra’n ch pyaar si…mere lyi satkar si…

tu bde sneh naal menu shingaran lageya….

Pyar da harek chatak rang, jis naal tenu lagda si main hor vi khoobsurat laggagi, mere ch bharan lagga…te tan tak bharda reha…jad tak main os pyaar de itr’ naal mehkan nhi lag payi….

Aur main apni akha’n nood layia…………

 

 

Tu kal phir aaya si….

Nirmohi dhup ch….irakha bhri dopher bann k….

Teri nazra’n ch hankar si…mere lyi dutkar si…..

Tu bde dvesh naal menu thes pohachaun lagga…..

Nafrat da karek jakhm, jis naal tenu lagda main hor vi kurup laggagi, menu den lagga…te tan tak denda reha….jad tak main os nafrat naal sadaindh nhi maarn lag payi….

Aur main apni akha’n nood layia…………

 

Tu aj phir aaya e…..

Udaseen hanere ch….. hanzua bhri raat bann k….

Tu bdi sharmindgi naal menu mana reha e…..

Teri nazra’n ch aanch hai…..mere lyi santaap hai…

Pachtave da harek hanzu, jis naal tenu lag reha main pehle vang ho javagi, menu dho reha e…te shayad hun tan tak dhon di koshish karega….jad tak mere armaana de siveya di raakh dhul nhi jandi….

 

Aur aj pher main apni akha’n nood layia……..

kyunki menu te shuru to ehi sikhaya gya hai….

k jidda vi rehna hai…te jive vi rehna hai….

main OSDI raza ch hi rehna hai……

 

Mandeep

14 Sep 2011

sandeep singh
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RAZAA......nyc bahut wadia lagga padd k....mandeep ji..

15 Sep 2011

Mandeep Kaur
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shukriya Mavi ji...n Sandeep ji

17 Sep 2011

Amrinder Singh
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bahut wadhiya mandeep ji..!!

18 Sep 2011

Jass Panaichan
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bahut sohna likhia ji .......keep it up 

18 Sep 2011

Balihar Sandhu BS
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Nice One Mandeep...!!!

18 Sep 2011

Deep AMAR
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Sade nal layia te na nibhayiaa us kudi ne, Sadi jholi payian tahbiya us kudi ne, DEEP jehnu aj jaan to vad k chunda ea, SAHLON nu ditiya tanhayian us kudi ne.....deep sahlon

18 Sep 2011

Gurminder singh
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Nice one ji likhde te share karde rho

19 Sep 2011

Mandeep Kaur
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shukriya aap sareyan da...Amrinder, Balihar ji, Jass ji, Deep ji n Gurminder ji....jo tusi sama kadd k meri poem nu padeya n saraheya vi.....

19 Sep 2011

sukhpal singh
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i really have no words,..........don't knw what 2 say,...........this poetry have so much pain inside,..........duawaan

04 Jul 2013

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