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Rishte

Rishte


Zindagi de ih rishte asi kinjh bunade haan
Ik dhaga tutte taan duja dhaga unde haan


zindagi di chadar te phull hi dikhan na khara
Ih soch liyaundi zeyada patjhad ghat baharaan


kadi na khud nu puchheya injh kyon hunda hai?
Har vele kandiyaa da shamana kyon hunda hai?


Tutte dhage nu koshish taan karo fir ton jodan di
Agge langhe paani nu fir ton vapis modan di


Ik dhagge naal zindagi di chadar saja ke taan dekho
Kinni taqt hai rishte de dhage ch azma ke taan dekho


Par, Dekhde dekhde ih rishte zindagi ban jaande ne
Shayad ise layee zindagi waang dhokha kar jande ne


-Arinder

22 Dec 2010

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Too good Arinder ji,


always behatreen he aunda aap ji kolon, eh vi us creativity da hissa aa...


keep going !!!

22 Dec 2010

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realy nice wording..thankx for sharing

22 Dec 2010

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nice doc..........menu pta kee feeling aayi kise divorcee vaste likheya.......to reunite......good job done...........bhatkeya nu raah dekhayi.thanx 4 sharing

 

22 Dec 2010

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Salahun layee shukriaa...

23 Dec 2010

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เจนเจฎเฉ‡เจธเจผเจพเจ‚ เจฆเฉ€ เจคเจฐเฉเจนเจพ เจฌเฉ‡เจนเจคเจฐเฉ€เจจ เจฐเจšเจจเจพ ......เจฌเจนเฉเจค เจ–เฉ‚เจฌ เจฌเจพเจˆ เจœเฉ€

24 Dec 2010

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nice lines thanks for sharing 22 g
24 Dec 2010

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boaht hi vdhya...

24 Dec 2010

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Wah Arinder...GOOD JOB...keep it up

24 Dec 2010

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bahut hi sohna likheya..realy nice wording,,,thankx for sharing
24 Dec 2010

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