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jaspal pier
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seene ch dabai baetha haa
Vfawa di matho umeed na kari
Kuj bevfaiya miliya c
Jo main dil ch sjai baetha haa
Main ikalleya hi sab dukh jarda geya
Ik ik karke door aapne to karda geya
Tu khud nu ena mere kareeb na kari
Kuj darad mere aapne si
Jo sine ch dabai baetha haa
Sach hai tere karke hi jeena sikheya main
Eh v sach hai ke tere te hi likheya main
Par aapne chawa nu mere te shheed na kari
Main maot nu manjil banai betha haa
Ho sakda kuj din dihade tere nal sokhe langh jange
Par made wele aakhar ikaleya tak ke dang jange
Mere dukha nu tu aapne naseeb na kari
Main jehar hizar da khai baetha haa
Manjil badlan de lai main rah badl ke dekhe ne
Dubdi bedi nu bochan jo main mlha badlke dekhe ne
Kuj v aesa mere azij na kari
Jo main sabh bhulai baetha haa
Kade vishde milde nahi rah shmshana de
Peyar kade milde ni upar dukana de
Mere lai khud nu aena jaleel na kari
Main tan shram mukai baetha haa
Dhanwadi han tera aukhe mod de karke
Sift teri poori hoi ni lafza de thod de karke
Par tu meri tareef na kari
Shaed main tan hak vi mukai baetha haa
...... ...... .... .. ..... ...pier
09 Dec 2014

JAGJIT SINGH JAGGI
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ਕਿਆ ਖੂਬ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਹੈ ਜਸਪਾਲ ਜੀ .....

 

Keep up the good work...

10 Dec 2014

jaspal pier
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Shukriya jagjit sir
10 Dec 2014

sukhpal singh
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very well written,...............Bohat khubb likheya aap g ne,.............jeo 

10 Dec 2014

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