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Shammi Bains
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ਰੰਗ ਵਟਾਉਂਦੇ ਦੇਖ ਲਿਆ.....

Writer :Shaminder Singh(Shammi Bains)

Nhi bhuldi main bra pula k dekh lya,

yaad odi ch dukh hijaar da sek lya,

Nhi c oh teri kismat ch bra maan nu smaja k dekh lya,

Nhi dil cho mitt sakda ,naam ode nu naam apne naalo la k dekh lya,

Ajj v mangda pagalan waang tainu rabb kolo ,aad aad k plla tha tha te matha tek lya,

Dekhi tu na sajana rang wtta li,shammi main apneya nu v rang wtaunde dekh lya..........

05 Oct 2012

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nice 1...keep improvin...:)

05 Oct 2012

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sohna likhia a veer g.... try in punjabi ...

05 Oct 2012

Shammi Bains
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dhanwad rajwinder ji,nd sunil veer ji..i will try my bst

06 Oct 2012

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