Sikwa ki kara oos khuda utte,

Sanu tan sade rehber ne mareya,

Zindagi to zindagi fir door chal gayi,

Janmo pehlan mavan ne dhiyan nu mareya,

Har koi fer jeondi laashs ho gaya,

Lokan nu jado apne zameer ne mareya,

Uth gaya yakeen ajj khuda to,
dharam layi Aadmi ne aadmi nu mareya,

Bhain layi fer veer vegane ho gaye,

Daultan layi jad puttan ne mavvan nu mareya,

PREET tan hairan hai ajj de insaan te,

Patheran de sehar vich Patheran nu shisheya ne mareya.jeo 

Plz view dee lod aa jee likhan ch nikhaar laike aaun layi
Jeo

aap g di kavitawaan wich already kafi nikhaar hunda hai gurpreet veer g,...........

 

jo is kavita wich vi saaf jhalak reha hai,...........superbly written

 

from start to finish this poetry becomes more and more intersting,......and as a reader full appreciation from me,...........hatts off,..........jio veer

Boht hi vadiya visha te ba-kmaal rachna gurpreet ji.boht hi khoobsoorat te nazuk atte sache ehsaas han tuhade shabdaan vich.

Sukhpal jee nd navpreet jee ikk purani rachna nu dowara refresh karna layi maan den layi
Waqt den layi bahut shukriya
Jiunde raho