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Navi ......
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AJNABI MUD GYA


Lagda hai fer kise da dil mere hatho dukh gya....
Gunaah ikk hor ajj mere lekhi jud gya....
Main te aakhya c ohnu dil da haal keh jawi aa k.
Oh te kamla dehleejo hi mud gya....

Nale hanjuyan de had menu rodya 
Nale aap v ohna de nal rud gya.....
Main te aakhya c ohnu dil da haal keh jawi aa k.... 
Oh te kamla dehleejo hi mud gya.....

Chad k menu do arthi gallan ch gote khandi nu.....
Aap oh fer ohna raahan te hi tur gya....
Navi" ne te aakhya c ohnu dil da haal keh jawi aa k.
Oh te kamla dehleejo hi mud gya....

By - navi 

05 Aug 2014

Gurpreet Khokhar
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Kujh lok bina permission to aa jande ne tan oh dehlizan kive paar karn navi jeee
Eh duniya hai u know very well
Theme bahut sohna select kita hai
Chalo laut chale galat aa gaye hum hee shayad
Rayis logo k milne ke waqt hote hai
Bahut khoob rabb tihadi kalam nu taufeek vakhshe
07 Aug 2014

Navi ......
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Hum to taraste hai koi hamari chaukat pe bhi aaye kabhi .....

Onko khone k baad is gareeb sa rahees na koi ho.....

Unki khushi ke husan mein hi bethe hai

Warna unse keemati kuch khone ko tha nahi
07 Aug 2014

Sandeep Sharma
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Bahut khoob g..Keep it Up !
07 Aug 2014

Gurpreet  Dhillon
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Touching hrt vry nce lines
07 Aug 2014

SANJEEV SHARMA
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bhaout sohna likha navi g likde raho ...........
07 Aug 2014

Navi ......
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Sanjeev g.....bahut dilo tuhada shukariya kardi aa..... Par Tuhade warge uchi suchi shayari karn wale insaan di Koi Rees nai g.....
Salute to ur words and deep thoughts......
Rabb eda hi mehar kare..... Bahut kuch sikhna aa tuhade sareya kolo
08 Aug 2014

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