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Pradeep Gupta
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ਸੁਗਾਤ..

 

ਦੋਸਤੋ ਇੱਕ ਖੁੱਲ੍ਹੀ ਕਵਿਤਾ ( free  verse ) ਪੇਸ਼ ਕਰ ਰਿਹਾ ਹਾਂ | ਇਹ ਕਵਿਤਾ ਮੈਂ

 

07-08-2011 ਨੂੰ ਲਿਖੀ ਸੀ |



ਹਰ ਕਿਸੇ ਨੂੰ
ਮੇਰੇ ਕੋਲੋਂ

ਬੱਸ
ਖੁਸ਼ੀਆਂ ਦੀ ਸੁਗਾਤ
ਚਾਹੀਦੀ ਸੀ

ਮੇਰੇ ਅੱਥਰੂ
ਜਦ ਵੀ ਪੂੰਝੇ
ਬੱਸ
ਗ਼ਮਾਂ ਦੇ ਹਨੇਰਿਆਂ ਨੇ
ਤਨਹਾਈ ਦੇ ਘੇਰਿਆਂ ਨੇ
ਅਤੇ
ਕਾਗਜ਼ਾਂ 'ਤੇ ਸਜੇ
ਇਨ੍ਹਾਂ
ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਦੇ ਡੇਰਿਆਂ ਨੇ |

 

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19 Feb 2012

bunty singh
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nky/ pkg[ w/ok g[Zs 
fvrohnk fbnkJhnk J/ 
bZrdh Bk B"eoh pVk o"bk gkfJnk J/
t/u phxk ohb evtkT[Dh nk
n?w n?u 1 s/ n?v btkT[Dh nk

 

23 Feb 2012

Gurminder singh
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bht vdia likhea vir g

23 Feb 2012

j singh
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nycc.. g........nycc.....

23 Feb 2012

Pradeep Gupta
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@bunty..

@gurminder..

@jasbir..


Shukriya dosto Smile

23 Feb 2012

ਕੁਲਜੀਤ  ਚੀਮਾਂ
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good one... but too many negative wibes....


look at greenery outside... je koi nahin then mother nature is with you, but sometimes we are too sad to realise it :)

23 Feb 2012

Pradeep Gupta
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Shukriya kuljeet ji..

 

" but sometimes we are too sad to realise it "

 

I agree with u on this..Smile

23 Feb 2012

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