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Kanwal

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bahut wadhiya likhiya hai g

17 May 2011

simar d sekhon

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bhut hi wadia likhya nimar...too gud g.....

17 May 2011

Simmy

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very nice. especially last 2 lines. keep it up

17 May 2011

Nimarbir

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Meharbani

bahut-bahut meharbani ji aap sabh di :))

17 May 2011

Seerat

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bahut vadiya lkheya Nimar...te bilkul sach likheya...last two lines are fantastic :)) great work....

17 May 2011

jujhar

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be continue...

Good Job

17 May 2011

rajinder

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ya its really gud poem.my Best Wishes wid u veer.

17 May 2011

Simranjit Singh

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close to reality

ਬਹੁਤ ਸੋਹਣਾਂ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਨਿਮਰ ਹਮੇਸ਼ਾ ਵਾਂਗ |

ਸੱਚ ਹੈ ਬਿਲਕੁਲ ਜੋ-ਜੋ ਤੁਸੀਂ ਆਪਣੇ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਵਿੱਚ ਬਿਆਨ ਕੀਤਾ ਹੈ...ਲਿਖਦੇ ਰਹੋ ਤੇ ਪੜਨ ਦਾ ਮੌਕਾ ਦਿੰਦੇ ਰਹੋ |

ਰੱਬ ਰਾਖਾ |

18 May 2011

Nimarbir

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Nimar

bahut-bahut meharbani aap sabh soojhvaan sajjna di !!!

18 May 2011

Navneet

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very well said nimar, every line is show truth...

well done thnks for sharing.

19 May 2011

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