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Balihar Sandhu BS
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Bahut KAIM likhiya Gurminder har waar dee taran...keep writing & sharing

12 Jun 2011

Gurminder singh
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Balihar veer ji teh dilo shukaria vir ji hosla afjayi lyi

12 Jun 2011

Jass Panaichan
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bahut khoob likhia minder ........kmaal e ji likhde rho 

 

thanx for sharing with us ..

12 Jun 2011

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ਬਹੁਤ ਖੂਬਸੂਰਤ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਗੁਰਮਿੰਦਰ ਵੀਰ...
ਤੁਹਾਡੀਆਂ ਰਚਨਾਵਾਂ ਪੜਕੇ ਕੁੱਛ ਕਹਿਣ ਨੂੰ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਬਹੁਤ ਘੱਟ ਹੁੰਦੇ ਆ ਹਰ ਵਾਰ ਮੇਰੇ ਕੋਲ.....ਸੱਚਮੁੱਚ ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਪਿਆਰਾ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਹੈ..

ਰੀਤ ਵਾਂਗ ਮੈਨੂੰ ਵੀ ਮਾਂ ਦੀ ਲੋਕ ਬੋਲੀ ਵਰਗੀ ਝਿੜਕ...ਵਾਲੀਆਂ ਸਤਰਾਂ ਬਹੁਤ ਅੱਛੀਆਂ ਲੱਗੀਆਂ...ਲਿਖਦੇ ਰਹੋ ਤੇ ਪੜਨ ਦਾ ਮੌਕਾ ਦਿੰਦੇ ਰਹੋ |

12 Jun 2011

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ਵਾਹ ਗੁਰਮਿੰਦਰ ਵੀਰ  ! ਪੜਦੇ ਹੋਏ ਇੰਝ ਮਹਿਸੂਸ ਹੋਇਆ ਜਿਵੇਂ ਉਹ ਮਿੱਟੀ ਦਾ ਘਰ ਮੈਂ ਆਪ ਬਣਾ ਰਿਹਾ ਹੋਵਾਂ...ਬੜੀਆਂ ਪਿਆਰੀਆਂ ਯਾਦਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਸਮੋਇਆ ਹੈ ਏਸ ਕਵਿਤਾ ਚ ! ਕਈਆਂ ਦੀ ਹੱਡਬੀਤੀ ! ਇਸੇ ਤਰਾਂ ਲਿਖਦੇ ਰਹੋ ਵੀਰ !

12 Jun 2011

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Veer g..... ik chhoti jehi benti ...


hun tuci apni kavitavan Publish krva dio g.. bahut kamal likhia a veer g.....

12 Jun 2011

Gurminder singh
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Jass 22 te grewal saab aina piyaar bakhshan lyi sukaria. Jio divroop 22 tuhaade cmnt di badi shiddat naal w8 hundi a kyonki hamesha hi kujh na kujh sikhan nu milda a , tuhade kahe chaar lafj edan asar karde ne jiwe bhalwaan nu desi ghio , galtian dasde rehna agge to vi , shukaria ji sunil ji aje kabil nhi haan par samaa aun te sab kujh ho jaawega . Thanx vir ji Jio

12 Jun 2011

ARSHDEEP Rakhra singh
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bahut sohna likheya gurminer 22 g ,,, thanks for sharing

13 Jun 2011

ਕੁਲਜੀਤ  ਚੀਮਾਂ
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Gurminder ji,


Mavi ji ne kiha ki tuhadi rachna parhan wale u apne naal lai turdi hai.... bilkul theek kiha ohna ne.... tuhadi kavita mere sahmane hamesha ik film wang chaldi hai.... thats beauty of your writing !!!


Bahut sohna likhya hai.... kamaaal kar ditti !!!

 

13 Jun 2011

Gurminder singh
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Arshdeep ji sukaria rachna pasand krn lyi ..jio kuljit ji aina maan bakhshan lyi shukaria . Tuhaade cmnt ch ik cheej missing a -- too good . . . .lol

14 Jun 2011

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