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malkit thamanwal
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ਸੁਪਨਿਆ ਦੀ ਧਰਤੀ,

ਮੇਰੇ ਸੁਪਨਿਆ ਦੀ ਧਰਤੀ,
ਦਾ ਮੰਜਰ ਖਾਰ ਜੇਹਾ ਏ ,
ਸਜਣ ਵੀ ਬਣਾਇਆ,
ਇਸ਼ਕ਼ ਵੀ ਕਮਾਇਆ ,
ਅੱਜ ਵਕ਼ਤ ਲੰਗੇ ਤੇ ਇੰਜ ਲਗਦਾ ਕੇ ,
ਓਹ ਵੀ ਸਮਾਂ ਬੇਜ਼ਾਰ ਜੇਹਾ ਏ ,,malkt

19 Mar 2012

Harpinder Mander
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good !,,,

19 Mar 2012

malkit thamanwal
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thanks g

 

19 Mar 2012

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nycc........

20 Mar 2012

malkit thamanwal
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thanks bro.....

20 Mar 2012

sukhpal singh
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its just a begining,..........you have a great thoughts veer,.............aap wadhiya likhde ho,......hor vi khubb likho

 

duawaan

11 Mar 2015

navpreet randhawa
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Wah boht khoob

11 Mar 2015

ਮਾਵੀ ƸӜƷ •♥•.¸¸.•♥•.
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Nice one ji !!
13 Mar 2015

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