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singh singh
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ਤਾਂਘ

dosto tuhade naal apni ek rachna shayer karn lagga haan. umeed karda haan ke pasand karoge.....

 

 

ਅੱਜ ਦਿਸਿਆ ਆਪਣਾ ਆਪ ਮੈਨੂੰ,
ਸਭ ਪਾਪ ਤੇ ਪੁੰਨ ਵਿਚਾਰਦੇ ਨੂੰ..

ਰਹਿ ਗਏ ਅਣਗੌਲੇ ਪੁੰਨ ਬੜ੍ਹੇ,
ਸਜ਼ਾ ਮਿਲੀ ਹਰ ਪਾਪ ਨਿਤਾਰਦੇ ਨੂੰ..

ਕੀ ਖੁਸਿਆ ਤੇ ਕੀ ਮਿਲਿਆ ਮੈਨੂੰ,
ਸ਼ਿਕਵਿਆਂ ਸਿਰ ਉਮਰ ਗੁਜ਼ਾਰਦੇ ਨੂੰ..

ਨਾ ਮੰਗ ਸਕਿਆ ਨਾ ਖੋਹ ਹੋਇਆ,
ਉਮਰਾਂ ਲੰਘੀਆਂ ਹੱਕ ਮਾਰਦੇ ਨੂੰ..

ਜਾਣਿਆ ਅਮਰਿੰਦਰ ਪੁੱਛਦਾ ਨਾ ਕੋਈ,
ਚੜ੍ਹੀ ਹਨੇਰੀ 'ਚ ਦੀਵੇ ਬਾਲਦੇ ਨੂੰ..

ਵੇਲਾ ਖੁੱਸ ਨਾ ਜਾਵੇ, ਮੈਨੂੰ ਡਰ ਲੱਗੇ,
ਮੋਏ ਅਰਮਾਨਾ ਦਾ ਸਿਵਾ ਬਾਲਦੇ ਨੂੰ..

ਹੁਣ ਤਾਂਘ ਜਿੱਤਣ ਦੀ ਹੈ ਇੱਕ ਵਾਰੀ,
ਮੈਨੂੰ ਸਦੀਆਂ ਹੋਈਆਂ ਹਾਰਦੇ ਨੂੰ..

04 Oct 2010

SIMRAN DHIMAN
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wonderful sharing.................keep writing 

04 Oct 2010

Lakhwinder Singh
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Singh Sahab ji kinna di likhi hai eh rachna..???

05 Oct 2010

Amrinder Singh
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mainu tan haasa aunda lakhi bai......

 

eh koi frustrate hoya... sawad lain aaya laggda...

tuhanu pata hee ae 1-2 mahine pehla ik baahla frustrate jeha hoya si banda..... mainu tan laggda oh ya ohde warge sawad lain nu aunde aa..... 

 

 

05 Oct 2010

Balihar Sandhu BS
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Balle bai SINGH sahib ne taan kamaal keeti payi ae...

 

bahut hee vadhia rachna ae 22 g....ikk ikk line kamaal dee ae...

 

Kee eh tuhdee maulik rachna ae 22 jee ?

 

Main v melbourne hee rehnda haan bai g...kade hor v sunao aapniyan kavitaavan.....

 

Lao g rachan likhan wale hee aa gaye ne....

 

par jo kamm SINGH sahib ne keeta ae eh taan bahut hee kamaal da ae....

 

@Amrinder....veer g...singh horan dee rachna parhke kee mehsoos ho riha ae main samajh sakdan....

 

 

 

05 Oct 2010

SIMRAN DHIMAN
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hahahaha sory menu lagda e Lakhwinder, Amrinder & Blihar ji main line tan bilkul sahi likhi e kiunki rachna bilkul kabile tareef e


pr menu eh nhi pta ki eh kisdi lkhi e???????


kiunki time di shortage aa mere kol vese menu shak tan c kiunki ajjkal pbzm de verhre daur chal reha na copy paste da

 

05 Oct 2010

Arsh kaur
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bahut vadia likhya g

05 Oct 2010

krishan goyal
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VERY NICE 22 JI,....

05 Oct 2010

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Krishan Veer G


Rply krn to pehlan sare rply te oh post changi trah padh leya kro


pher rply krya kro



05 Oct 2010

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bahut hi vadiya lakheya......................................

05 Oct 2010

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