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ਓਹ ਮੈਂ ਹੋਣਾ

ਤੇਰੇ ਨੈਣਾਂ ਦੇ ਬੂਹੇ ਉੱਤੇ,ਦਸਤਕ ਦੇ ਕੋਈ ਜਗਾਵੇ ਤੈਨੂੰ
ਕਿਤੇ ਹਵਾ ਨਾ ਸਮਝ ਲਈ ,ਓਹ ਮੈਂ ਹੋਣਾ....

ਤੇਰੇ ਮੰਜੇ ਦੀ ਪੁਆਂਦ ਚ’ਖੜਾ ਹੋ ਕੇ ਕੋਈ ਸਲ੍ਹਾਵੇ ਤੈਨੂੰ,
ਕਿਤੇ ਖੁਆਬ ਨਾ ਸਮਝ ਲਈ,ਓਹ ਮੈਂ ਹੋਣਾ....

ਦੁਨੀਆਂ ਦੀ ਇਸ ਭੀੜ ਦੇ ਵਿਚ,ਪਿਛਿਓਂ ਆਣ ਕੋਈ ਬੁਲਾਵੇ ਤੈਨੂੰ,
ਕਿਤੇ ਗੈਰ ਨਾ ਸਮਝ ਲਈ,ਓਹ ਮੈਂ ਹੋਣਾ....

ਕਾਲੀਆਂ ਬੋਲੀਆਂ ਰਾਤਾਂ ਚ’ਪਰਛਾਵਾਂ ਜੇ ਨਜ਼ਰ ਕੋਈ ਆਵੇ ਤੈਨੂੰ,
ਕਿਤੇ ਚੋਰ ਨਾ ਸਮਝ ਲਈ,ਓਹ ਮੈਂ ਹੋਣਾ....

ਸੁਨ-ਮੱਸਨੀਆਂ ਰਾਹਾਂ ਚ’ਬੇ-ਜਾਨ ਸ਼ਰੀਰ ਕੋਈ ਮਿਲ ਜਾਵੇ ਤੈਨੂੰ,
ਕਿਤੇ ਲਾਸ਼ ਨਾ ਸ਼ਮਝ ਲਈ, ਓਹ.....?....ਹੋਣਾ....

23 Mar 2012

deep deep
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tooooooooooo gud...

23 Mar 2012

Shammi Bains
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bhut soona likhya hai .........dil di awwaj c.

 

23 Mar 2012

j singh
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Thnx.....deep , shammi......i share it only......

23 Mar 2012

preet shergill
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very nice ji...

23 Mar 2012

j singh
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Thnx....preet.....

23 Mar 2012

surjit singh
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bahut khoobsurat rachna veer ji...beautiful

23 Mar 2012

Pradeep Gupta
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Thanks for sharing jasbir ji.

 

 

23 Mar 2012

karmjit madahar
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very nice .......last two lines ta dil nu sooh gayia ...bhut vadia g
24 Mar 2012

j singh
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Thnx......surjit ji...pardeep ji...karmjit ji......

24 Mar 2012

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