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Jatinder Pal Singh
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mitti to fir mitti

pehla ta maafi chahunda k aini wadi poem  share kar reha te dusri eh maafi chahuna k punjabi type nahi aandi te poem bahli wadi hai so koshish karna paran di

 

 

ik aashiq di dhoor ne kiti ardaas

jaanda ha mitti ha te mitti hi rehna

lagge aashiq de pair te mainu pea eh kehna

k main v bujha sakan kise di pyaas

akhan vich akhan pa nahi sakda

dil vich kise nu wasa nahi sakda

kamm main kise de aa nahi sakda

sunya tu theekar nu thakur kar sakda

ardaas garib di har jar sakda

ki tu dil mere di aas kar sakda????

 

muskraya rabb te kehan laga

painda aukha par manzil suhavni hai

pyaar paak bhawe sarir bhawe ruhavni hai

bujhani pyaas kise di  aukhi bari

bhawe mann di te bhawe jismani hai

pairan vich rulna painda hai

bhatii vich sarna paina hai

kai ranga vich rangna paina hai

hatti vich vikna paina hai

chad jidd dard aukha jo sehna paina hai

 

 

mitti aakhe na kar bhane rabba

pa de daat eh tu jholi meri

rabb muskuraya te ho alop geya

mitti seh boht kuch ban sohna ghara geya

hun baitha hatti vich oh sochi peya

kisi sapere hath aa zehar na pachawa main

ban vaid da ghara na zindagi bachawa main

na baith mandir rabb nu bhog lgawa main

hathon sohneya de bus aashiq di pyas bujhawa main

jaagi kismat te jhund mutiara da hatti aaya

'malki' wargi sohni de ghara oh sohna pasand aaya

 

gehna bann oh sohneya de sir te jachya

ik aashiq di bujhaun nu pyaas oh c machya

kai din dubda tarda pani bharda reha

par hale ohde sohnea nu aashiq na koi jachya

ik din ohda dhol pardesi pattna te aa kharya

sohneya nalo zada c ghare nu cha aa charya

kehnda tu kar layi bukk te paani maithon mangya

eh v na puchya tu pani mitha,khara ya main zehar nal bharya

na main jana tainu na tu mainu jane par us malik ne eh rishta kaisa gharya

tainu pila k pani sohneya mainu hatho chadya

 

 

main jitho chalya c ajj othe hi aa kharya

par ajj ho k mitti khushi de hanjua mainu bharya

pair,agg,pani sab ik ajnabi layi main jarya

par parteet oh dikhayi ohne main 'preet' de ghar ja warya

wah sajna wah malka swang eh tu kaisa rachya

par shayad ohde pyar vich main apne aap nu labya

 

 

 

maafi chahuna ik war fir galtia di te aini lambi poem di baksh laina

rabb rakha

 

 

10 Feb 2010

Lakhwinder Singh
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bahut khoob veer ji..tfs

10 Feb 2010

Amrinder Singh
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Bahut wadhiya 22 g...!!

10 Feb 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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Bahut kaim aa 22 g. Amazing.

10 Feb 2010

Jatinder Pal Singh
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boht boht shukriya lakhwinder amrinder and satwinder from jatinder... wah ji wah sare inder . shukarguzar ha tuhade pyar da kyonki ik ta aini waddi essay wargi poem te oh v tutti bhaji but you all are great

rabb rakha

10 Feb 2010

Jassi Sangha
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bht vdiya mundya.. but kuch ku words smjh nhi lagge,, nhi tan waise adhi poem punjabi ch type kr lyi c..

10 Feb 2010

Jass Panaichan
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เจฌเจนเฉเจค เจนเฉ€ เจตเจงเฉ€เจ† เจฌเจพเจˆ เจœเฉ€..........เจ•เจฎเจพเจฒ เจฆเฉ€ เจ•เจตเจฟเจคเจพ เจฒเจฟเจ–เฉ€ เจ† เจคเฉเจธเฉ€เจ‚ ....เจฌเจนเฉเจค เจนเฉ€ เจตเจงเฉ€เจ† เจœเฉ€

11 Feb 2010

Jatinder Pal Singh
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boht boht shukriya jass jee and special thanks to jaspreet again she again tried to write it in gurmukhi

13 Feb 2010

Manpreet Singh
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bahut khoob........

02 Jan 2011

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