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| Vidayi |
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Aaj main hogai parayi babula.
tere gharon aaj meri vidayi babula.
Nikki hundi na c aya ae khayal babula.
Ik din main jan duje desh babula.
chete auney tere ladaye hoye laad babula.
puttan vangu pal mainu kita tun jawan babula.
aaj ho gayi jaad main jawan babula.
aya mere dil ch khayal babula.
tere gharon aaj meri vidayi babula.
Rajkumar varga tun mere layi war tolya.
jine pyar nal tere mann moh laya.
ohdey naal tur jana ae main door babula.
tere gharon aaj meri vidayi babula.
teri god vich apna main bachpan manaya.
Ik-Ik cha mere utton varaya.
tere jeha na koi hona ae dayal babula.
tere gharon aaj meri vidayi babula.
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14 Jul 2009
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Very good
keep it up
jeondi wasdi reh
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14 Jul 2009
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nice.. but there is always scope of improvement..
Keep writing..
we all welcome you to the website..
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14 Jul 2009
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gud one janab keep sharing....!!
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14 Jul 2009
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| hi! |
Bohat Vadiya Likya hai SISTER,
Plz continue
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15 Jul 2009
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nikki..............wala pehara bahot touching hai madam ji ..................continue......u r on right path
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15 Jul 2009
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expression of feelings are very nice in ur poetry.
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08 Apr 2013
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