teriyan yaadan vich khoyi na sudh budh koi,

takkan rastaa main tera aaj darr te khaloyi,

ik teri deed nu main rahi han tarasdi

eon jape jiven macchi paani bajon tadafdi

ek tere bajon hor mainu aasra na koi

teriyan yaadan vich khoyi na sudh budh koi,

takkan rastaa main tera aaj darr te khaloyi,

 

ek chit kare khamb la ke kite ud jaan

sohne sajjana de vehre vich ja k main was jaan

fir mud wapis  partan na chahe bulaye mainu koi

teriyan yaadan vich khoyi na sudh budh koi,

takkan rastaa main tera aaj darr te khaloyi,

 

 

lagi reh, nice, keep it up
and keep writting

"deed teri nu tarsan akhian,
sawan wangu barsan akhian,
yaad teri vich khoi sajjna,
birho de manke jandi paroi sajjna,
ho challi adhmoi sajjna,
aa ja darsh dikha sajjna, tere wajo na koi sajjna."

Vadhia hai G .... Keep it up

Best wishes

nice words , keep it up

yeah good one..

parhde raho.. te changa likhde raho..!!

gr8................

Keep it up....bahut wadia
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yaad teri ne inj rolya meinu meri hi na surat koi
aapne aap nu tenu akha aap di pehchan mein khoi
g karde mein gal lag rova par naal mere na koi
sabh tere meinu bewafa kehnde aapna na aakhe koi
das chandri mein kidhar java vich raahe mein khloi
jidhar dekha tuhi tuhi aapni pehchan mein khoi
yaad teri ne inj rolya meinu meri hi na surat koi
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mind blowwwing...................


Keep Writting

classic piece of work, keep it up