keho jeha hove meri preet da haani

rooh da sangi

bhujey dil d kahani

bandh palka pishey paldey supne

jo padna jaaney

saahan d mehak to mera dard chaaney

dil rondey nu varauana jaaney

haan

chup karauana jaaney

kithon labhan haan da haani

jis lae adhian kooch chubarey chadna

mehndi la la kudiyan vich fabna

labh k leao dil da jaani

soorat d thaan seerat veikhe

pyar mere d keemat deikhe

kahe pyar naal

jo mainu marjaani

maaye kithon labhan haan da haani

is nazam ch sirf tere hi nae har insaan de ahsas hann..har kudi-munde de supne...bahut mubarak.....hor namaan likhde raho.....

Awesome.. Hardeep ji bahut khoobsurat ehsaas ne.. Tusi ta kamaal karti.. Eda hi share karde raho hun mainu tuhadi har rachna di udeek riha karegi.

thanx satti ji ,mainu lagda k har ladka ladki aapne would be lae supne dekhde hun. kaean de sach hunde hun and kae samjautey d raah turr paindey hun.

tuhade comment mere lae mayine rakhde hun. thanx.

Mere kol hai.. I m the luckiest one.. Ohnu kuch kehn di lod ni paindi.. No one cant imazine..

satti ji parmatma os heerey nu sambhal k rakhan d tuhanu daat bakshey.

bahut khushi hundi hai,jado tusi aje bolde nae and tuhada sathi dass dinda hai k dil vich ki hai.

maa to baad duniya da ek ahem rishta,jo kach nalon sohal and pathar nalon sakht ho jaanda hai.

best wishes for both of you.

and aapni care rakho,nae tan ohne duji latt v bhann deini hai,tuhadi laparwahi to tang aa k.ha ha ha .........(sorry,majaak ch keha)

Hahahahaha... Lattan bhanan nu ta tyar hi rehndi aa. Hanji sahi kiha tusi. Thanks alot for blessing..

very nycc.....dil dian gehraia ton likhe akhar......

bahut khub  ji

.ਤੁਮ ਕਸਮ ਲੇਤੇ ਹੋ ਹਰ ਬਾਤ ਪੇ ਇਤਬਾਰ ਕੇ ਲੀਏ,
ਨਾ ਤੋ ਭੀਤਰ ਸੱਚ ਨਾ ਖੁਦ ਪੇ ਇਤਬਾਰ ਲਗਤਾ ਹੈ।

...........ਬਹੁਤ ਸੁੰਦਰ ਰਚਨਾ