har dhee nu ohdi maa ijjat da sooraj dindi hai,jis d tapash seh k os nu baal k rakhna painda

meri maa ne dita c sooraj mainu

keha c deikhin sambhaal k rakhin

chahida es vich seik poora

aapne aap nu baal k rakhin

bada chir jazbaat maar sooraj main taapaaya

par

dil dian galian ch hooka pe gaya

sooraj nu thandi hawa da bulla pe gaya

badi aagh ikathi kiti main

raah turde kae lok miley

kamli keh pukaran lag paye

beparwahi naal turey bahut

par

aaj tahney dil nu bhaara karde ne

dheean sooraj bukal ch lukae firdian hun

par

lokin pata nae kyu

chandrama dian gallan karde hun

bhul jaandey ne

chann ch daag hunda

dheean daagi hon

tan babul d shamley wali pugg

dhee nu kabri paa

aap lokan de pairin pe jaandi ae

maaye! ne maaye

aah dekh mera sooraj tupp reha

didi bht vdhiya...mza aa gya..

magic magic likheya

bahut wadhiya...... sahi keha bilkul...

great job

Awesome hardeep ji bahut hi wadhiya likheya .. Sahi gallan likhiyan.. Salaam tuhadi kalam nu te roch nu,.. Eda hi brkarar rakhna... Jeoooo.

jado eh kavita likhi tan kise v gal da koi dhayn nae rakhea,means kise tukbandi,shandbandi etc. bus jo khyal aayi gayi,bus paper te utaardi gayi.

jassi tere jina wadhia nae kuriye eh. teri tan har gal dil nu tumbdi hai. par fe v thanx sis.

arshdeep thanx dear jo reply kita.

amrinder ji tuahda v thanx,jo tusi kavita pad k reply like samjea. thanx ji.

satti ji tuhade kolo hamesha honsla afjae mili hai. thanx tusi pad k pasand kiti.

asal ch ehdan da kina kuch likhea india chad aayi,sochea c kine padnian merian jablian. par aadat nae badaldi ,aivien kuch ku sama pa k fe likhan da dil karda hai. so eh tazi kavita hai. sach manna pehlan punjabizm naal share kiti hai. hun aapne raanjey nu v sunauangi. ha ha ha

thanx to all of u my beloves

 wkeyi hi bahut kamaal likheya hai... u deserve for it

thanx satti ji.

meri maa ne dita c sooraj mainu

keha c deikhin sambhaal k rakhin

chahida es vich seik poora

aapne aap nu baal k rakhin

Wah !...eh kmaal d gal kahi...baal k rakhin,,

bada chir jazbaat maar sooraj main taapaaya

par

dil dian galian ch hooka pe gaya

sooraj nu thandi hawa da bulla pe gaya

badi aagh ikathi kiti main

//eh v umda hai

raah turde kae lok miley

kamli keh pukaran lag paye

beparwahi naal turey bahut

par

aaj tahney dil nu bhaara karde ne

dheean sooraj bukal ch lukae firdian hun

par

lokin pata nae kyu

chandrama dian gallan karde hun

bhul jaandey ne

chann ch daag hunda

dheean daagi hon

tan babul d shamley wali pugg

dhee nu kabri paa

aap lokan de pairin pe jaandi ae

maaye! ne maaye

aah dekh mera sooraj tupp reha

....

this is ultimate piece of poetry...end shayad hor v khubsurat ho skda hai,,par eda v khub hai..

keep sharing

narinder ji thanx

eh umdaa ho sakda c,j ehnu poem samaj k likhdi. asal ch eh poem udo likhi,jado main night shift te job te c. kuch time free hundi haan,so diary kad layidi hai,bus fe jo khali dimag ch auan lagda,paper te utaar laindi hai.kal raat job te jaan lagi ne fatafat type kar add kar diti. yakeen karna submit kar k padi v nae ,k sahi type hoyi hai.

par tuhade warge dost pad k reply karde hun,tan changa lagda hai.