saasi, sohni ,heer ch mitro dekhea ki hai

jo akhoti babean wang

poojde firde ho

sohni pani vich duob moyi

aaj v tan lakhan sohnian

samajik neima de

gandhley panian ch

dubdian ne

saasi thalaan ch kook moyi

aaj v tan lakhan saasian

ujaad manaa de thalaan ch

kookdian firdian ne

 oh heer saleti ki alehda kar gayi

kehdi mohabatt da dumm bhar gayi ?

oh tan mohabatt de naam te

dagaa kar gayi

na varr d rahi

na he aapne aashik d

haan !

aaj v lakhan heeran ne

par

oh varr ghar bana laindian ne

aashik varr nae bann paunde

oh tan aaj kal

kaidon naal saanjh pa

paisa banuan lag peya hai

es lae mitro

pyar naam d cheej

aaj kal ajaieb gharan ch milugi

Nice One. I m agreed with u .

waah hardeep ji .............bahut bahut vadhia soch da pragtava kita tusi ...... keep sharing 

thanx heera ji

asal ch aaj kal sab banauati hai,fe pyar v artificial ho gaya hai.

thanx jass ji

tuhade dostan de sir te soch sohni bann rahi hai,nae tan dimag chalda nae c.

bht he umda.. u can do better.. keep it up didi..chnge first class khyaal ne tuhade kol/...

bahut khoob hardeep... bahut sohna likheya..... aidan hee likhde raho....

Sohna likheya hardeep ji., ajj kal samaaj de muh te kas ke chaperh... As jassi said first class soch.. Jeooo.. Ik gal kehni chauhnda haan, jithe sacha pyar hunda hai othe daga ya dhokhe wali gal ni aundi.. Jive heer bare keha, pyar ta do roohan da mel hunda hai te paak mohabat waliyan roohan mil hi jandiyan ne sareera tak seemat nahi hai pyar..

amrinder ji honsla afjayi lae bahut bahut shukriya.

you can do better...

patar sahab kehnde ne.... changa parhde raho.... te laazmi changa likhna sikh jaaonge....