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ਮਾਵੀ

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ਕਵਿਤਾ ਬਹੁਤ ਵਧੀਆ ਹੈ, ਜੋ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਵਿੱਚ ਅਹਿਸਾਸ ਪਰੋਣ ਦੀ ਗੱਲ ਕਰਦੀ ਹੈ ।

ਜਦ ਪੰਛੀ ਨੂੰ ਉੜਨਾ ਆ ਜਾਂਦਾ ਹੈ ਫਿਰ ਉਹ ਆਪਣੇ ਖਿਲਾਫ਼ ਸਾਜ਼ਿਸ਼ਾਂ ਨਹੀਂ ਰਚਦਾ ਸਗੋਂ ਹਰ ਅਹਿਸਾਸ ਅਨੁਸਾਰ ਆਪਣੇ ਪਰਾਂ ਦੀ ਲੈਅ ਸੰਭਾਲਦਾ ਹੈ ।

ਸੋ ਸੋਹਣਾ ਸੋਹਣਾ ਲਿਖਦੇ ਰਹੋ , ਜ਼ਿਆਦਾ ਪੜ੍ਹੋ ਅਤੇ ਹੋਰ ਜ਼ਿਆਦਾ ਲਿਖੋ । :)

22 Feb 2013

Gurpreet

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ਸ਼ੁਕਰੀਆ ਮਾਵੀ ਜੀ ...

22 Feb 2013

Pradeep

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ਬਹੁਤ ਖੂਬ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਗੁਰਪ੍ਰੀਤ ਵੀਰ |

24 Feb 2013

gurmit

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vadhia kosish hai chalde raho ji

26 Feb 2013

gurmit

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vadhia kosish hai chalde raho ji

26 Feb 2013

Balihar Sandhu

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vadhia ae veerey...tfs

26 Feb 2013

Gurpreet

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ਸ਼ੁਕਰੀਆ ਗੁਰਮੀਤ ਜੀ ਅਤੇ ਬਲਿਹਾਰ ਜੀ...

28 Feb 2013

sukhpal

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Bohat khubb , bohat wadhiya likheya,...........

05 May 2013

Gurpreet

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ਸ਼ੁਕਰੀਆ ਜੀ.....:)

09 May 2013

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