Main han ek udhda parinda,
dar-dar diya thokra khadiya main,
jad kdi huss k vekhiya main,
es duniya ne murjhaya main.
C bachapan mera hasda vasda,
na dar c loka da- na dar c madi duniya da.
C yaar v mere naal bade,
dhadkan ban k c jo naal khade,
te udhna v sikhaya c.
C mani moujh bahara di,
jad rakhea pair jawani ch,
chaya aasman to paar jana,
par majburiya ne ehsa dangiya,
bus beh gya khamosh jiya,
hun rahinda dil v kuj udaas jiya...
Main han ek udhda parinda.,

Hi frnz udhda parinda meri pehli rachna hai plz reply krna k tuhnu kive di lagi

Welcome at Punjabizm Reet ji ...

tuhadi eh rachna ik insaan de do roop pesh kr rhi a ... bachpan te jwani ... bachpan mast par jwani ch kujj marjburian te jimmevarian .. par rachana ch hor sudhar di lod a ji |

.... hor sohna likho ji ... tfs

Bohut bohut dhanvad g main puri koshish krangi hor sudaar liyan dh

ਖੂਬਸੂਰਤ ਰਚਨਾ ਹੈ ਜੀ......keep it up......

 

good efforts....keep writing

Thanx 2 all of u