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UMAR BEET GAYEE

KUJ LIKHIYA OS LAYEE

PAR OS NU PASAND NA AAYA

KI KHAN APNE BAARE OS NU

JAD MERI GAL DA KOI JWAB HI NAI AAYA

KRDA C OHNU PIYAR BATHERA

PR APNE PIYAR NU PUGGA NA PAAYA

REH GAYA KALLA OHDIYAN YADDAN CH

BAKI KOI GAM NAAL REH NAI PAAYA

JANDE HOYE KEH GAYE MILANGE GWABAN VICH

PAR YADDAN OHDIYAN KR KE MAIN SO NA SKYA

LIKHDE LIKHDE OHNU KHAT UMAR BEET GAYEE

PAR JUBANU ‘SUNIL’ OS NU KUJ KEH NAI SKYA

(SHE LEAVES ME ALONE)

KUJ LIKHIYA OS LAYEE
PAR OS NU PASAND NA AAYA
KI KHAN APNE BAARE OS NU
JAD MERI GAL DA KOI JWAB HI NAI AAYA
KRDA C OHNU PIYAR BATHERA
PR APNE PIYAR NU PUGGA NA PAAYA
REH GAYA KALLA OHDIYAN YADDAN CH
BAKI KOI GAM NAAL REH NAI PAAYA
JANDE HOYE KEH GAYE MILANGE GWABAN VICH
PAR YADDAN OHDIYAN KR KE MAIN SO NA SKYA
LIKHDE LIKHDE OHNU KHAT UMAR BEET GAYEE
PAR JUBANU ‘SUNIL’ OS NU KUJ KEH NAI SKYA
 
 
 
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02 Sep 2010

Lovepreet

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dnt be sad.. ho skda rab ne kuj vdhya soch k rakhya hove...

02 Sep 2010

Gurpreet

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good one

suni bai kamal e!!

02 Sep 2010

gurinder

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kinnu likhe jane ho 22 g

bahut khoob 22 g

02 Sep 2010

_Preet Dhillon_

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dntt b sad...

itzz nycc..

03 Sep 2010

SIMRAN

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sahi gal e natkhat di udaas hon di lod ni sunil.

ki pta rab dian sochan da

03 Sep 2010

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bht sohna likheyaa mehrma...

likhde rho ....

ik ese soch naal ralda milda khyaal saanjha kr reha haan .....

ਮੈਂ ਉਮਰ ਭਰ ਉਹਨਾਂ ਲਫਜਾਂ ਦੀ ਤਲਾਸ਼ 'ਚ ਰਿਹਾ ਜੋ ਕਿਸੇ ਨੇ ਵਰਤ ਨਾ ਹੋਣ , ਸ਼ਾਇਦ ਇਸੇ ਆਪਣੇ ਮਹਿਬੂਬ ਨੂੰ ਕੋਈ ਖਤ ਨਾ ਲਿਖ ਸਕਿਆ...

03 Sep 2010

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its nice ! keep it up ! god bless u

03 Sep 2010

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Mainu Bahut khushi a k pbzm te sarya nu mera enna khayal a

i m not sad bt i miss something which is special 4 me

03 Sep 2010

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ਸੁਨੀਲ ਯਾਰ ਤੇਰੀਆਂ ਸਾਰੀਆਂ ਰਚਨਾਵਾਂ ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਵਧੀਆ ਨੇ .....ਬਸ ਯਾਰ ਜੇ ਮੇਰੀ ਇੱਕ ਬੇਨਤੀ ਮੰਨ ਲਵੇ ਤਾਂ ਹੋਰ ਕਮਾਲ ਹੋ ਸਕਦਾ ........ਵੀਰ ਥੋੜੀ ਕੋਸ਼ਿਸ਼ ਕਰਕੇ ਜੇ ਰਚਨਾ ਨੂੰ ਪੰਜਾਬੀ 'ਚ ਟਾਈਪ ਕਰਕੇ ਪੋਸਟ ਕਰਦਿਆ ਕਰੇਂ ਤਾਂ ਪੜਨ ਦਾ ਅਨੰਦੁ ਦੂਣ-ਸਵਾਇਆ ਹੋ ਜਾਵੇ .......ਬਹੁਤ ਸ਼ੁਕਰੀਆ

04 Sep 2010

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