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bahut wadhiya choti jehi c.
bohat khubb, is writing wich khasiyat eh si ki eh rachna kafi rythm wich si.....jeo
m da cmnt kithe gya.............del..?..anyway....choti jehi poem ..per boh vdia g....!
k g...pehla v shi c te hun v..:)..keep writin!
too good veer ji ....god bless your kalam