ਬਾ-ਕਮਾਲ ,,,,,,,,,ਬਹੁਤ ਵਧੀਆ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਏ ਵੀਰ ਜੀ ਜਿਓੰਦੇ ਵਸਦੇ ਰਹੋ ,,,,,,,,,,,,
wah jee wah...bahut KHOOOOB....keep writing & sharing
Gurminder bhaaji and balihar bhaaji,
thanks a lot.
bahut vadhiya likhaya ji.rab tuhanu sada lehho jehia sohnia likhta likhan da bal bakse
bhut vdia likhia e ji......
behut vadia ga
bhut vadiya bai g.....
rabb kise nu apne pyar ton dur na kre....
vichoda bhut buri chij hundi a ......
thanks to everyone for apprititaton
well written