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ਗੁਰੀ ਸਿੱਧੂ
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ਅਸੀ ਚਾਹੁੰਦੇ ਹਾ

 

 

 ਅਸੀ ਚਾਹੁੰਦੇ ਹਾ

 ਅਰਮਾਨਾ ਦੇ ਮਹਿਲਾਂ ਵਿਚ ਜਿਉਣਾ 

ਤੁਸੀਂ ਕਾਫ਼ਰ ਬਣ ਕੇ ਢਾਹਿੳ ਨਾਂ........

 

 ਅਸੀ ਚਾਹੁੰਦੇ ਹਾ

ਇਰਾਦਿਆ ਨੂੰ ਪੂਰਾ ਕਰਨਾ 

ਤੁਸੀਂ ਅੜਚਣ ਬਣ ਕੇ ਆਇੳ  ਨਾਂ.....

 

 ਅਸੀ ਚਾਹੁੰਦੇ ਹਾ

ਮੰਜਿਲ  ਸਰ ਕਰਨੀ 

ਤੁਸੀਂ ਬੇਬ੍ਫਾ ਕਮਾਇੳ ਨਾਂ........

 

 ਅਸੀ ਚਾਹੁੰਦੀਆਂ  ਹਾ

ਹਰ ਮੁਸਕਿਲ ਵਿਚ ਸਾਥ ਦੇਣਾ

ਮਾਪੇਓ ਬੇਗਾਨੀਆ ਕਹਿ ਬੁਲਾਇੳ ਨਾਂ........

 

ਅਸੀ ਵਕਤ ਨਾਲ ਚਾਹੁੰਦੇ ਆਗਾਹ ਵਧਨਾ

ਸਾਨੂੰ ਬੁਰੇ ਸਮਝ ਠੁਕਰਾਇੳ ਨਾਂ.........

 

******GURLEEN SIDHU *****

 

 

19 Feb 2011

Nimarbir Singh
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superb creation....bahut hi lajawaab likheya hai g,,,thankx for sharing
19 Feb 2011

Ziraj Deep
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bhut sohna likhea gurleen

19 Feb 2011

Lovepreet Dhaliwal Sidhu
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boaht hi vdhya likhya te prstntion v baoht hi vdhya...

19 Feb 2011

ARSHDEEP Rakhra singh
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 kurhi punjab di v gud and lines r  2 gud

19 Feb 2011

ਰਾਜਵਿੰਦਰ    ਕੌਰ
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bahut sohna likheya sohni kudi di tra ..........keep it up!

19 Feb 2011

ਰੂਪ  ਢਿੱਲੋਂ
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Very Nice Bhain ji!!

19 Feb 2011

Gurpinder Singh Mann
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ba-kamaal likheya hai g,,tfs
19 Feb 2011

Amrinder Singh
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gurleen bhaine.. aah film ch kudi vi bathinde di si.... u too..

oh vi sidhuaN di kudi si... u too...

te jeho jeha nature ohda si... main thoda vi same oho jeha laggda

:)

 

hamesha di tarah lajwab... te constant improvement aa writing ch ...

keep writing n keep sharing.. :)

 

stay blessed....

19 Feb 2011

baljinder singh
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about you

bhaut haiii vadiaaaaa  you have a different  thought  from every one.......  rabb salamt rakhe

19 Feb 2011

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