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| 0 jad mai jammi |
main jammi ghar sogh c chaeya
lohri da din ghar baith langayeya
koi na aan kehdavey mainu
muh mohday main takkan jehnu
ghar sumbhrey naley chori takkey
maa meri mainu na khedandi thakkey
dadi kosay rabba eh ki bahna vartaya
kyioun sadi johli tu eh pathar payeaya
meri apni jaat he muh maitho moday
jay mai mukgi,
tan bhvikh vich koun banaou jodday....
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25 Feb 2011
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so nice brother ....
bhut vadia..
par veer g .. ehnu likhia kis ne tuci es bare dsya nai g...
par writing bhut kmal di a specially one line....
MERI APNI JAAT HI MUH MAITHON MODE ..
bhut vadia veer g
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25 Feb 2011
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| ssa ji |
ssa sunil ji,
veerji es kavita nu mai he likhya hai ji and thanks a bunch upon liking my lines...
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26 Feb 2011
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| welcome |
bahut hi sohna likheya g...keep sharing the good work.
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26 Feb 2011
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really nice writing...tfs
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26 Feb 2011
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Too good..
bahut sohniyan lines ne ... keep up the good work !!!
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26 Feb 2011
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