shukriya ji tuhada sab da pasand karn layi... :)

Again bahut wadhiya brother main shabdan vich byan ni kar sakda bas ek kamm kar sakda haan salute to ur soch and kalam.

Thanks veer..!!

Thanks veer..!!

bahut sohna likhiya ammi veer... soch te dharna di bujdili nu nakaran layi bahut vadhiya peshkaari ...!!

thanks 22 g.. n navkiran ji

hey so nice..plzzzz do not ever use tough words for at least jo lokan lyi te lokan bare likhde ho.. kyunki sanu hale apnian poems te tbsre krwaun dee naubt nhi ayi k apan urdu farsi wall hath mariye... main urdu farsi nu bura nhi kehndi,, me too love urdu a lot.. but j asin chaunde han k aam janta ya aam lokan de bnke likhiye tan mainu naam tan yaad ni kise diyan kuch lines ne.. mainu exact tan lines v yaad ni but meaning eh c k,

jo log tuhadi 10,20 ya 50 rs. di kitab yan fer 2-3 rs, da newspaper ni lai k par skde,ki oh shabdkosh afford kr skde ne meaning dekhn lyi???

so always keep in mind while u r writing smthing abt aam insaan.. okie..god bless u..may b chhota muh bdi baat hai,,but i wanted to tell u that..

n abt this poem i loved it..it my thinking type..

Thanks jassi..... it was just that i wanted to write one of that kind.....

baaki meri mostly kavitaavan ch baahle aukhe shabad nahi hunde......

simple n spashat...... :P

ji i  agree dearie......