apne dukhan dee dastaan likhi hai ess rachna ch navi jee

eh hamesha ton e hunda hai ki jo safar de rahgeer bande ne oh raahan ch rode jayda te manzilan ghat vikhaunde aa 

fir b asin sab nu barabar nahi aank sakde

birle hee hunde aa jo sanu manzila da sirnawan b de jaande aaa so umeed karde aa ki aaun wala waqt vadia raahgeeran da ho nivde te tusi apnia manzilan te pahunchon 

Rachna ne di handol ke rakh dita maan saab da song hai'Chad dila dil deke Rog Lavalenga Bekadre lokan vich kadar gualenga'

god bless u 

thank you so much gurpreet g......maafi chaundi aa ki jane anjaane tuhada mann v dukhi hoya....

 

par apne valuable comments dite ohde lyi dilo shukarguzaar aa....

 

khush raho hmesha

 

rabb rakha

Bahut hi khoob likhia g

shukriya gurpreet g 

Bohat e emotional kardi hai eh kavita readers nu, kiyunk
dil se nikle lafz seedhe dil mein utar jaate hain
God bless u nvi .

such is life . Very well composed .

tajinder g and maavi sir bahut shukriya tuhada 

 

thank you so much for the appriciation