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bahut wadhiya likhiya hai g
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17 May 2011
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bhut hi wadia likhya nimar...too gud g.....
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17 May 2011
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very nice. especially last 2 lines. keep it up
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17 May 2011
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Meharbani |
bahut-bahut meharbani ji aap sabh di :))
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17 May 2011
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be continue...
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17 May 2011
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ya its really gud poem.my wid u veer.
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17 May 2011
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close to reality |
ਬਹੁਤ ਸੋਹਣਾਂ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਨਿਮਰ ਹਮੇਸ਼ਾ ਵਾਂਗ |
ਸੱਚ ਹੈ ਬਿਲਕੁਲ ਜੋ-ਜੋ ਤੁਸੀਂ ਆਪਣੇ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਵਿੱਚ ਬਿਆਨ ਕੀਤਾ ਹੈ...ਲਿਖਦੇ ਰਹੋ ਤੇ ਪੜਨ ਦਾ ਮੌਕਾ ਦਿੰਦੇ ਰਹੋ |
ਰੱਬ ਰਾਖਾ |
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18 May 2011
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Nimar |
bahut-bahut meharbani aap sabh soojhvaan sajjna di !!!
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18 May 2011
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very well said nimar, every line is show truth...
well done thnks for sharing.
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19 May 2011
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