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Kanwal Dhillon
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bahut wadhiya likhiya hai g
17 May 2011

simar d sekhon sekhon
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bhut hi wadia likhya nimar...too gud g.....

17 May 2011

Simmy  Brar
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very nice. especially last 2 lines. keep it up

17 May 2011

Nimarbir Singh
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Meharbani



bahut-bahut meharbani ji aap sabh di :))

17 May 2011

Seerat Sandhu
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bahut vadiya lkheya Nimar...te bilkul sach likheya...last two lines are fantastic :)) great work....
17 May 2011

jujhar singh
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be continue...

Good Job

17 May 2011

rajinder rose
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ya its really gud poem.my Best Wisheswid u veer.

17 May 2011

Simranjit Singh  Grewal
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close to reality

 

ਬਹੁਤ ਸੋਹਣਾਂ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਨਿਮਰ ਹਮੇਸ਼ਾ ਵਾਂਗ |

ਸੱਚ ਹੈ ਬਿਲਕੁਲ ਜੋ-ਜੋ ਤੁਸੀਂ ਆਪਣੇ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਵਿੱਚ ਬਿਆਨ ਕੀਤਾ ਹੈ...ਲਿਖਦੇ ਰਹੋ ਤੇ ਪੜਨ ਦਾ ਮੌਕਾ ਦਿੰਦੇ ਰਹੋ |

ਰੱਬ ਰਾਖਾ |

18 May 2011

Nimarbir Singh
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Nimar



bahut-bahut meharbani aap sabh soojhvaan sajjna di !!!

18 May 2011

Navneet Seehra
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very well said nimar, every line is show truth...

well done thnks for sharing.

19 May 2011

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