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well said lit bro.God Bless U.
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16 Jun 2011
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vaaahhhh... jeonde raho..
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16 Jun 2011
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well written..
bahut hi khoobsurat likheya....thankx for sharing !!
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16 Jun 2011
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Bahut vadhia likhiya ae hameshan vaang..!!
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17 Jun 2011
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Ninder ji,
words hai nai mere kol tareef lai... shabad muk jande ne tuhadi rachna di tareef kardian....
Bs ese taraa likhde raho... keep going ... keep keep going !!!
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17 Jun 2011
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ਬਹੁਤ ਖੂਬ ਲਿਖਦਾ ਏਂ ਮੇਰੇ ਵੀਰ ! ਨਜ਼ਾਰਾ ਬਝ ਜਾਂਦਾ ਪੜ ਕੇ ! ਇਹ ਰਚਨਾ ਬਹੁਤ ਪਿਆਰੀ ਹੈ ...ਬਸ ਇੱਕੋ ਕਮੀ ਹੈ ਕਿ ਹਰ ਸ਼ੇਅਰ ਵਿਚ ਅਖਰ-ਗਿਣਤੀ ਦਾ ਫਰਕ ਥੋੜਾ ਜ਼ਿਆਦਾ ਹੈ ! ਹੋਰ ਕੋਈ ਖਾਮੀ ਨਹੀਂ ! ਲਿਖਦੇ ਰਹੋ ...
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19 Jun 2011
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u created that MAGIC again ninder sion
bahaut vadiya........keep writing n keep sharing.....stay blessed
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19 Jun 2011
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bohat sohna likheya hai...tfs
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19 Jun 2011
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vry nice g...too gud lines...
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20 Jun 2011
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