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beautifulll composition........aj kal diyan maavan ta bache nu mitti toh bacha ke rakhdiyan....jad ke ohh vee din cee jad mitti naal khedna sehatmand bache di nishani samjheya janda cee.........we have come far far away :(
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07 May 2012
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shi kiha veer g....... ajj kal tan gallian ch mitti vi nahi mildi g...
philan kde mitti de khed hi pasand hunde c .. kise nu satt lgdi c tan khinde c ..thodi mitti laga le.....par hun tan bacheya nu mitti ton dur rkhia janda a ... pindan ch hun vi mitti de khed khede jande ne par shiran ch tan oh mitti vekhan nu vi nahi mildi jis nu vekh ke bacha khud nu khede bina rok nahi skda ...
like te comment layi sukria veer g.
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07 May 2012
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bachpab warge mooj ne labne zindge saree ch
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19 Jun 2012
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shi kiha ajay veer.... bachpan vrgian mojan kde ni milnia ...
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19 Jun 2012
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bahut hi khubsurat rachna hai veer ji...eh sanu sade beete bachpan bare yaad karavaundi hai jad na koi fikar te na hi koi chinta hundi si...odon di oh baaladi umar ajj hakkan mardi payi aa par...hun oh sama beet chukka hai....bahut wadiya likhiya veer....!!!
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20 Jun 2012
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bahut sohni kawita a sunil..tfs
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20 Jun 2012
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Nav Vire .... Deep G ... thnx to both of u ...
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20 Jun 2012
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sohna likhya he, bachpan yaad aa giya, tasveer vi muho boldi he
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20 Jun 2012
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