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wah g wah
lagda nahi k pehli rachna bahut sohna likhya
likhde raho
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06 Jan 2011
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Navdeep, Navjot & Jatinder pal jee....tuhada saariyan da bahut bahut SHUKRIYA....esnu parhan te aapne keemti comments den layi....JEO
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06 Jan 2011
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achi kosis hai veer teri,, par kuch is tara nahi lagda jeve eh sab kuch phala keti na keti kisi hor ne ve likhe hunda hain ,, hain kuch change ta hai par theme phala waag he lag reha hai veer ,,, gusa na karna veer mare gal da ,, hain kosis karana k jado ve new likhan de kosis karo tusi ta kuch ve demag to soch k na likhna ,, hamesa dil wich joo ve aa reha hai likhde javo eh na sochna k ke likh reha hain ,, jado likh lavo fir demaag nu use kar k us nu bas tarteeb wich karn de kosis karna fir tusi khud dekho ge k eh kis tara likh deta tusi ina shona ,,,,,bas veer manu changa lagega tusi ek din aasa likho k aap nu ve aapne aap te mann ho jave us din
rab rakha veer
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08 Jan 2011
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SSA Jagwinder....Thanks for your reply here... lagda tusin es nu dhyan naal parhan d koshish kiti ae...
Baaki eh taan main start 'ch hee likhiya hoyia ae k eh rachna hond 'ch kiven aayi, es layi repeat karan d lorh nahi ae..
Jithon takk theme de gall hai taan eh koi navan theme nahi hai...ehde naal milda julda taan anginat likhiya giya hona ae, te main jiven shuru 'ch hee likhiya hai k eh koi soch samajh k nahi likhiya giya, os wele d lorh c, te baad 'ch usnu jorh torh karke poora kar liya...kamiyan peshiyan te sure hongiyan, jekar tuhade kol koi sujha hai k kiven sudhar sakdiyan ne taan jaroor dena...kyonk mainu likhna te koi khaas aaunda nahi...bass aieven do char ku rachan likhiyan ne...
Thanks for the feedback....
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09 Jan 2011
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bhut sohna likhia e ji.......
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09 Jan 2011
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thx veer aap de reply da becuse aaj kal ta lok ulta he samjde hun j koi kuch keh deve tusi mare gal da gussa na kar k us te wrok karn de gal keh k dil khush kar deta manu poora yakeen hai veer j ap de soch isi tara de rahi ta tusi ek din bhoot acha likh javoge , baki mare suzaa de gal keti veer jithe ve lord hovege main karaga jine mare too hoo sakege veer, baki ek suzaa ta main aap nu phala he de cukha hain k jo dil wich aaonada hove bas us nu likh de rahoo bina soche samje k oo theek hain ja nahi eh na socho us time,, jado tusi kuch ve likh lavo ta us nu usi time read na karo balke jado us da theme demaag wicho nikla jave like 1-2 week baad read karo te fir tusi khud he us rachna nu better kar sajoge jeee
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15 Jan 2011
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bahut sohna likheya blihar g .....j tuhadi pehli rachna kamal hai phir taan sanu tuhade taun bahut umeeda rehngiyan hamesha ......likhde rho !
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15 Feb 2011
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Sat Sri Akal Rajwinder....rachana nu parhan layi time kadhiya tusin...SHUKRIYA
hun te kai waar likhan de ajmaish kar chukka haan..te es ton ilawa hor v share kar chukka haan ithey sabh naal...hai te sabh kush aje sikhan wali stage te hee...par jiho jiha v likh hunda ae likh layida ae hun....
mehrbaani ae Punjabizm parivar d jehna har waar kabool keeta ae jo v jihi jiha v likhiya ae...
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17 Feb 2011
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