marvellous!....fantastic!!...awesome!!!

 

I can say the future of punjabi poetry is bright....

 

expecting more from u veer....

 

jeoo!!!!!!!!

 

awesome

ik ik line bahut e lai vich zindagi di doongayi da byan kardi hoyi

har para hor gehra te hor khoobsurat hunda gya

grrt going

:-)

bohat hi vadiya likheya hai ji...keep writing n keep sharing....looking forward to read many more beautiful poems like this from u :)

Happy birthday bai g te bahut jyada sohni rachna jive k hamesha hundi aa me socheya k bai g de birthday te e reply karunga rab tuhanu hmesha khush rakhe te tuhada har supna pura kare