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veer tu c sohna likheya ee te ,,agge to kheyaal rakhna galtiya da,baaki jo kisi ne nukte dsse ne jroor us te amal krna...keep it up...
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06 Oct 2012
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Bhut vadia g dil khus ho gya pad k......
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06 Oct 2012
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mtle da sahi mtlb dassn di khechal krna ji ...
nhi pta chlla ki kehna chah rahe o
duja hassn nal toye gayb ho jande ne ji, lines bandian ne .. dimples sirf muskroun te bande ne ....jisde v bande ne
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06 Oct 2012
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ਵਾਹ ਗੁਰਮਿੰਦਰ ਜੀ
ਕੁਝ ਹੋਰ ਵੀ ਸ਼ੇਰ add ਕਰੋ ਇੰਨੀ ਵਧੀਆ ਗ਼ਜ਼ਲ ਇੰਨੀ ਜਲਦੀ ਖਤਮ ਹੋ ਜਾਂਦੀ ਹੈ
Just too good
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06 Oct 2012
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saare dostaa da gazal pasand karan lyi bht bht shukria ji .....duaawan
mavi ji main rawan haasa hassan di gall nhi kiti...lines eh san ...chehre te jad haasse chaar khilaar lwa ....aina ku hassan naal saade taan toye doonghe ho jaande ne ...tuhaade pta nhi kio khatam ho jande ne ...eh tuhaanu pta hona ..:)
matle di doosri line
khud nu lagi khud di nazar utaar lwaa ..
es da bhaaw eh nhi ki sheesha vekhn naal nazar utaari jaa sakdi hai ...
object apni khoobsurti nu vekh ke edaan mehsoos karda hai ki menu khud di najar lagg gyi hai ...te oh utaar lwaa...ethe eh nhi kiha ki nazar sheesha vekhn naal utaari gyi hai .....
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07 Oct 2012
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sharn ji tuhaanu aje intjaar karna pawega
thanks ...
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07 Oct 2012
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