Thanks so much Sanjiv  ji.boht boht shukriya sama kad k meri rachna paran di.tuhadi honsla afzai layi te nigge swagat layi shukriya

bohat sundar likehya hai tusi Nav ji,

swaal ikko hai , par esde roop bohat han ..

farz te haq nal nal challne chahide ne , jo ki pehle v nahin san hun v nahi han.

 

Gopian golian, seetawan, daropdian ajj vi bohat ne ..

 

par ajj de yug ch aurat di gulaami de roop badal gaye han :

 

1) gehne , jo shingar nalo wadh usde gulam hon da parteek ne.

2) beauty contests , usde badan di sharreyam numayesh. Talent dikhaun layi nange hona zaroori nahi.

3) parda, burqa parasti, jis ch sirf akhan e dikhayi dendian, usnu aam insaan wang vicharn di azadi nahin hai .. kiyu ?

4) media advertisements,

5) talaaq de mamleyan ch aurat nu lagdi compensation, par bache jwan hon te uhton khoh laye jande ne.

6) Kanooni haq, usda koi ghar e nahi hunda. mangna painda, je mil janda fer rishte khatam kar ke.

 

mera vichar hai ki koi haq ya barabri di daud nalon wadh hai je aurat ik aam insaan wang dunian ch apna jeevan marzi mutabik jee sake..

 

 

 

very beautiful creation Navpreet ji,

And very genuine question .... Mavi ji ne moral kadh ee ditta hai so kehan nu kuj bacheya nai...

Very good writing keep it up !!!

thanks mavi ji.tuhade shabad hamesha menu vadiya likhan layi parerfe rehnge.tusi apna saman meri is rachna nu ditta us layi mein dilon dhanvadivhaan ji

kuljit ji boht boht shukriya ji.tuhade comments mere layi keemti han ji.hameshs inj hi honsla afzayi karde rehna ji

Boht shi swaal utahea e tuc, boht vdia composition

mai kite pdea si
" Na devi, Na hoor,, Na chan di kaatar likh
Aurat nu j likhna hai ta Mard braabar likh"