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ARSHDEEP Rakhra

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thanks to all freinds and very thanks to arinder 22 g for suggestion

06 Jan 2011

harjinder

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nice piece of work

hi arsh, dis is really touching....honestly agree with arinder jee. just keep it up in a more constructive way........

JEO........te share karde rehna

07 Jan 2011

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ਬਹੁਤ ਵਧੀਆ ਅਰਸ਼ ਵੀਰ..........

ਬਾਈ ਅਰਿੰਦਰ ਦੇ ਸੁਝਾਹ 'ਤੇ ਵੀ ਗੌਰ ਜਰੂਰ ਕਰੋ .........

thanx .......ਲਿਖਦੇ ਰਹੋ

ਬਹੁਤ ਵਧੀਆ ਅਰਸ਼ ਵੀਰ..........

ਬਾਈ ਅਰਿੰਦਰ ਦੇ ਸੁਝਾਹ 'ਤੇ ਵੀ ਗੌਰ ਜਰੂਰ ਕਰੋ .........

thanx .......ਲਿਖਦੇ ਰਹੋ

07 Jan 2011

Gurminder

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bahut vadhia arsh ji ,,,

holi holi sabh vall aa jaange bs likhde raho ,,,,

mainu pta bnda aapne vallo koi kasr nhi shad da ,,,

sudhaar holi holi hunda a ,,,,

likhde raho te share karde raho,,,,

07 Jan 2011

ARSHDEEP Rakhra

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thanks to all freinds

08 Jan 2011

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