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bahut khoob..keep writin.:)
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10 Sep 2012
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wow.....bahut khoob sharan .....keep it up
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10 Sep 2012
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jo insaan starting vich aina vadhia llikhda a oh agge jaake chamkda sitaara banega ..
punjabi sahit de amber te ...
kmaal de jazbaat ne ji ...
ਬਹੁਤਾ ਮੋਹ ਨਾ ਪਾ ਬੈਠੀਂ ਮੈਂ ਹੱਸਣ ਵਾਲੀ ਗੁੱਡੀ
bht bht duaawan ji ....keep it up....
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10 Sep 2012
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Waah Jee Waah....kya baatan ne...ikk waar fir ton khoobsurat rachna....lagge raho hun..!!
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10 Sep 2012
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ਪ੍ਰਮਾਤਮਾ ਹੋਰ ਵੀ ਵਧੀਆ ਲਿਖਣ ਦਾ ਬਲ ਬਖਸ਼ੇ ! ਜਿਓੰਦੇ ਵੱਸਦੇ ਰਹੋ,,,
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10 Sep 2012
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Sareyan da bahut bahut shukriya ji ਮੇਰੀ poem ਪਸੰਦ ਕਰਣ ਲਈ :)
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10 Sep 2012
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very nycc.......
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11 Sep 2012
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Be-hadd khoobsurat!
Bahut hi sohni rachna.
Pehle 'Baaghi lafz', hun 'hassan wali guddi'. Dowen hi likhtaan ba-kamaal!
Emotions dohaan de ikdum wakh. Standard of writing, depth of thoughtfulness dohaan ch ikko jehi, sagon ikk duje ton wadh ke!
God bless! :)
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11 Sep 2012
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THANKS :)
encouragement vaste.
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11 Sep 2012
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