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bhttt pyaare shabad ne!! but incontinuity laggi kite na kite.. form te hor kamm kro Rajwinder... bhttt sohni kavita likh skde o! :) keep sharing!!
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25 Apr 2012
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shukriya jaspreet apne vichaar dain lyi....... sure i'll give my best ...:)
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25 Apr 2012
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ਇਸ ਕਵਿਤਾ ਨੂੰ ਲਿਖਣ ਵਾਲੀ ਕ਼ਲਮ ਵਿਚ ਮੈਨੂੰ ਆਪਣੀ ਕ਼ਲਮ ਦੀ ਝਲਕ ਵਿਖਾਈ ਦਿੱਤੀ ............. ਅਹਿਸਾਸ ਦਾ ਹਰਫਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਸੁਮੇਲ ,.........ਬਹੁਤ ਵਧਿਆ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਇਸ ਕਵਿਤਾ ਨੂੰ ਆਪ ਜੀ ਦੀ ਕ਼ਲਮ ਨੇ ,........... God Bless............Duawaan
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19 Mar 2015
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ਮੈਡਮ Rajvinder Ji, Credits to You !
Brief and beautifully creative attempt, touching just one aspect though...as aptly pointed out by Gurpreet Ji...and subsequently quite gracefully conceded by you as well...
Really very well written...
Thanks For Sharing...
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20 Mar 2015
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thank you g ... @sukhpal.. @jagjit ... g!! :)
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21 Mar 2015
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ਕਵਿਤਾ ਤੂੰ ਤਾਂ
ਬਿਰਹਾ ਦੀ ਮਹਿਬੂਬ ਲਗੱਦੀ ਹੈਂ.......ਬਹੁਤ ਖੂਬ, ਬਾਕਮਾਲ
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22 Mar 2015
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Thank you ... iqbal g... :) !
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22 Mar 2015
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