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Namanpreet Grewal
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jiyo

kmaal likheya Mandeep ji....sb satran bahut hi kmaal hn.....awesm thankx for sharing here..

25 Sep 2011

hardeep kaur dhindsa
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bahut he khoob rachna hai.............

 

sat shri akal maavi sir.......mera manna hai k pyar ek bahut he khoobsurat ehsaas hai ...........and eh marr nae sakda.......fe laash kivien ho sakda......?? par eh sirf ohdu laagu hunda ,jad dovien dhira pyar dilan d teh ton karde hon.......

 

 

par jad eh pyar kise gabru da shaunk ban k reh jaavey ,tan banda jeondi laash ban jaanda......eh tan fe v pyar hai..............mainu lagda mandeep bahut hudh tak safal rahi hai ajehi ladki de ehsaasan nu pargtaun ch,jis nu pyar de naam te majaak milea...........par eh sirf meri niji soch hai..

26 Sep 2011

Mandeep Kaur
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SSA frnds...aap sareyan da bohat dhanvad...jina ne vi meri rachna paddi...te sarahi.....main thodi jehi busy chaldi aa ajkal...I.T. returns di last dates chal rahia ne...so pehla respond nhi kar paayi....aap sareyan da tahe dil to shukriya......

 

Mavi ji...jdo eh rachna main tuhade naal saanjhi kiti si...tuhade vichar meri rachna naal nhi mil rhe si...tusi kujh jwaab vi dite san...te kujh suaal vi kite san....tuhadi harek salaah sar mathe mere....te tuhade suaala da jwaab os time vi si mere kol....per kyi vari hunda na...k assi taal dende aa...reason kujh vi ho sakda....main vi buss ohi kita...

 

baaki tuhanu pta hai...na te main koi saahit padd di aa te na follow kardi aa....na hi koi jyda bhautik gyaan hai menu :) ....meri lekhni mere jazbaatan te tiki hai...jo mehsus kardi aa...ohi likhdi aa....n ais ch koi shakk nhi...pyaar bohat khobsurat ehsaas hai...main te aap kehni aa...harek insaan nu zindgi ch ik vaar pyaar zarur karna chahida....pyaar sanu behtar insaaan banan ch madad karda.....ais rachna ch vi main ohi likheya jo main mehsus kita......n jina ne kde na kde kise na kise nu...hadd to vadd pyaar kita huna....o zarur samajh paunge....

 

jithe tak tuhada suaal hai...k pyaar ik ehsaas hai te isdi laash nhi ho sakdi...main ais naal bilkul sehmat nhi aa.....je ehsaas mar sakde ne....armaana...zazbaatan da khoon ho sakda hai...je assi eh gall mann sakde aa...te marn vala kujh na kujh te hovega hi...koi na koi vajood te osda hovega hi....n je vajood hai...te pher laash vi hai....n vese jdo main eh kavita likhi si....main pyaar di laash nu "os kudi" de naal relate kita si......per pyaar di laash...harek os bhautik cheez ch disdi aa....jo kde na kde os pyaar naal judeya hunda....bhave o apna sareer hai...ja kitab ch peya hoya o sukeya hoya gulaab da phul.....likhan n explain karn nu te hor vi bohat kujh hai....per kujh jazbaat bol k ja samjhaye nhi ja sakde....sirf mehsus ho sakde ne.....

 

Hardeep ji ne bilkul theek samjheya te janeya meri rachna padd k.....k main ki kehna chah rhi si....

26 Sep 2011

Mandeep Kaur
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Mavi ji...ik hor gall...tusi keha...pyaar ik ehsaas hai...eh ja te hai...ja nhi hai....ais hai ja nhi hai ch vi bohat kujh hai.....jo explain di hadd to kite bahar hai...jo sirf mehsus hi ho sakda....n vese vi pyaar ch sab kujh possible hai....jo dimaag di soch to kite parre hove...o vi......

26 Sep 2011

Gurinder  Singh
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i m spechless aftr reading this......awesome combination of emotions & feelings.... TFS
15 May 2013

Mandeep Kaur
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@gurinder ji....shukriya ji time kadd k aini purani post parhan lyi n sarahun lyi :-)
17 May 2013

Pradeep Gupta
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too good mandeep ji..

18 May 2013

Mandeep Kaur
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thanks pradeep ji :)

05 Jul 2013

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