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Harjinder Kaur
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Sharan ji, khoob kmaal da likhde ho....
Kvita de vahen vich veh jayida ae,very gud flow of poem.....
Jawani vares de pani diyaan challaan warge jazbaat aapni hond vikhaa rhe ne......
Likhde raho te share krde raho......
Share krn layi shukriaa.
Rab mehar kre.......
03 Sep 2012

Sharanpreet Kaur Randhawa
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ਏਨਾ ਮਾਣ ਦੇਣ ਲਈ ਬਹੁਤ ਬਹੁਤ ਧੰਨਵਾਦ ਸਾਰਿਆਂ ਦਾ
:)
Honestly speaking I was expecting criticism for my baagi words :)
04 Sep 2012

D K
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bahut hi sohni rachna hai sharan ji...thanks for sharing...!!!

04 Sep 2012

j singh
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TOO GOOD........TFS.......

04 Sep 2012

Sharanpreet Kaur Randhawa
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ji shukriya

05 Sep 2012

sanjeev kumar
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Wah Ji Wah ...... Chhaa gye oo tusi .... Thaa kar ke .... ;)
05 Sep 2012

Sharanpreet Kaur Randhawa
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Smile

thanx ji ,,,,,,THA karke...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

06 Sep 2012

Rupinder Kaur
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Amazingg Sharan !!!

06 Sep 2012

Gurpreet Khokhar
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ਸਲਾਮ ਆ ਯਾਰ ਤੇਰੇ ਲਫਜਾ ਨੂ ਵਹੁਤ ਸੋਹਣੇ ਜ਼ਜ੍ਵਾਤ ਉਕੇਰੇ ਨੇ ਦਿਲ ਦੇ ਪੰਨਿਆ ਤੇ ਕੁਝ ਕੁ ਹੱਡ ਬੀਤੀ ਆ ਕੁਝ ਕੁ ਜਗ ਵਿਤੀ ਆ ,
ਬਸ ਹੁਣ ਪਿਛੇ ਮੁੜਕੇ ਆ ਵੇਖੀ ਲਾਗੀ ਰਹ .
ਵਧੀਆ ਕੋਸ਼ਿਸ਼ ਹੈ .
ਸ਼ਾਂਝਾ ਕਰਨ ਲੈ ਧਨਬਾਦ .

07 Sep 2012

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wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wahwah wah wah wah wahwah wah wah wah wahwah wah wah wah wahwah wah wah wah wah

 

Wow !! Good Job

07 Sep 2012

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